Chapters 1-4RAW: https://www.mediafire.com/file/e9zd7cqs1kina70
Chapters 1-4
RAW: https://www.mediafire.com/file/e9zd7cqs1kina70
A by the numbers yuri story, but pretty cute none the less. Content warning: country mouse masquerading as lesbian anxiety, excessive cafe drinks as a symbol of suppressed desire, a lesbian-to-be being honest with themselves for once.
I can try to help with cleaning and redrawing. Not promising anything. If I fail to do this, I'll let you know.
>>25955Sweet! Any and all help appreciated.
>>25955
Sweet! Any and all help appreciated.
While the title means “I Want You To Only Show Yourself to Me”, I think a better title is “Only Show Yourself to Me”
Content warning: Useless vs. non-useless lesbian face off!
Content warning: Retrograde confession, classic nobody talks to anybody so everyone suffers in silence, mob science.
>>25949Here's the cleaned chapter 1 in psd files.
Keen to help typesetting this! I'll post it here for QC when it's done.
Derp.
Chapter 1 is typeset. No credit yet.https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/15lXQXe4swtdd3FswaswdY3VTrbV_q6HP
>>26027Looks nice.On page 8, bottom right panel, I forgot to redraw parts of the cloud, so you can see a white space left for the text "The nearest...". You can try to redraw the clouds or move the text up, so it will fill the white space.On page 17, center panel, I didn't redraw the heairlines on the right side of her head, so they look cut off. Try to redraw them or place the "THUMP" sfx in the way, it will hide them.
>>26027Great work on this! It turned out really nice. Here's a short list of adjustments I think would be beneficial, mainly just minor phrasing adjustments and miscellaneous typesetting bits.
>>26027Link is updated with all the changes and added credits. Should be good to go!
>>26027
Link is updated with all the changes and added credits. Should be good to go!
>>26040Looks good.Add "Chapter 1" for the title name on credits page.>>25958Here's the cleaned chapter 2 in psd files.
>>26040Looks good.Add "Chapter 1" for the title name on credits page.
>>25958Here's the cleaned chapter 2 in psd files.
>>26043Updated the link. I'll be working on chapter 2 then!
Released. Good work everyone!
>>26050There's a typo on page 10, 14 and 15. It should be "Tano-san", not "Tada-san".
>>26050I've updated the link with the fix (ch1) for page 10, 14, and 15 herehttps://drive.google.com/drive/folders/15lXQXe4swtdd3FswaswdY3VTrbV_q6HP
And here's chapter 2, ready to QC.https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1W0XlT8JD8OBtxEtF3cnmxSwsSGSJnD32
>>26056Nice.Maybe change the name of the file of credits page to something like "ch1_credits.png" or something. Naming it just "chapter 1" looks weird. Just my opinion.>>26057Looks nice.Why did you change the font for the title? In raws every chapter has the same font. Maybe we should also stick to the same font for consistency?Also, if we are skipping recap page, you should start numbering pages from 0001.
>>26056Nice.Maybe change the name of the file of credits page to something like "ch1_credits.png" or something. Naming it just "chapter 1" looks weird. Just my opinion.
>>26057Looks nice.Why did you change the font for the title? In raws every chapter has the same font. Maybe we should also stick to the same font for consistency?Also, if we are skipping recap page, you should start numbering pages from 0001.
>>26057Chapter's done. QC'd, fixed the numbering and added credits.
Released chapter 2.
Oh, and I remembered to include your group name on the Dynasty upload, OrangeOtter. Sorry about missing that last time, I didn't know you wanted to do that.
Chapter 1 still not updated here and on dynasty.
>>26069All good!Cute chapter and was fun to do. Thanks to everyone involved!
>>26069All good!
Cute chapter and was fun to do. Thanks to everyone involved!
>>25967Here's the cleaned chapter 3 in psd files.
>>26079Thank you! I'll get to it.
Here's chapter 3. No credits yet.https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/16UXk5SRZoPQPVDw6fz0HmUVMQCcAbmrM
>>26110Looking good. Great job as always.
>>26114I appreciate it!>>26110Chapter's updated. Added credits.
>>26114I appreciate it!
>>26110Chapter's updated. Added credits.
>>26119Released. Good work everyone!
>>26119
Also, I've uploaded the download link and the chapter on Dynasty for chapter 1 with the fixes.
>>26027Fixed a typo on page 8.
Over at another group, there were some nice words about the quality of this release. Good job, everyone!
I've updated the download link with the new page 8 and the upload on Dynasty.
Still waiting for the anon who usually does it or whoever wants to CLRD chapter 4. I mean I probably could do it myself, but it won't be as good (considering how clean the previous chapters are). I'm not much of a redrawer tbh.
>>26308SI still want to help, but don't have time right now. I will try to start cleaning ch4 next week. I also have ch5, but I will post it after ch4 is done.
Just started cleaning ch4. It will take a while. Just letting you know.
Here's the cleaned chapter 4 in psd files.
>>26345Thanks! I'll start working on it.
>>26345
Thanks! I'll start working on it.
Status?
Very interested in seeing this one get done!
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