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4967261 No.25947  

Chapters 1-4

RAW: https://www.mediafire.com/file/e9zd7cqs1kina70

>> No.25949  
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A by the numbers yuri story, but pretty cute none the less. Content warning: country mouse masquerading as lesbian anxiety, excessive cafe drinks as a symbol of suppressed desire, a lesbian-to-be being honest with themselves for once.

>> No.25955  

I can try to help with cleaning and redrawing. Not promising anything. If I fail to do this, I'll let you know.

>> No.25957  


Sweet! Any and all help appreciated.

>> No.25958  
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While the title means “I Want You To Only Show Yourself to Me”, I think a better title is “Only Show Yourself to Me”

>> No.25967  
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Content warning: Useless vs. non-useless lesbian face off!

>> No.25974  
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Content warning: Retrograde confession, classic nobody talks to anybody so everyone suffers in silence, mob science.

>> No.25997  

Here's the cleaned chapter 1 in psd files.

>> No.26020  

Keen to help typesetting this! I'll post it here for QC when it's done.

>> No.26023  
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>> No.26027  

Chapter 1 is typeset. No credit yet.

>> No.26030  

Looks nice.
On page 8, bottom right panel, I forgot to redraw parts of the cloud, so you can see a white space left for the text "The nearest...". You can try to redraw the clouds or move the text up, so it will fill the white space.
On page 17, center panel, I didn't redraw the heairlines on the right side of her head, so they look cut off. Try to redraw them or place the "THUMP" sfx in the way, it will hide them.

>> No.26031  
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Great work on this! It turned out really nice. Here's a short list of adjustments I think would be beneficial, mainly just minor phrasing adjustments and miscellaneous typesetting bits.

>> No.26040  


Link is updated with all the changes and added credits. Should be good to go!

>> No.26043  

Looks good.
Add "Chapter 1" for the title name on credits page.

Here's the cleaned chapter 2 in psd files.

>> No.26045  

Updated the link. I'll be working on chapter 2 then!

>> No.26050  

Released. Good work everyone!

>> No.26052  

There's a typo on page 10, 14 and 15. It should be "Tano-san", not "Tada-san".

>> No.26056  

I've updated the link with the fix (ch1) for page 10, 14, and 15 here

>> No.26057  

And here's chapter 2, ready to QC.

>> No.26058  

Maybe change the name of the file of credits page to something like "ch1_credits.png" or something. Naming it just "chapter 1" looks weird. Just my opinion.

Looks nice.
Why did you change the font for the title? In raws every chapter has the same font. Maybe we should also stick to the same font for consistency?
Also, if we are skipping recap page, you should start numbering pages from 0001.

>> No.26062  

Chapter's done. QC'd, fixed the numbering and added credits.

>> No.26068  

Released chapter 2.

>> No.26069  

Oh, and I remembered to include your group name on the Dynasty upload, OrangeOtter. Sorry about missing that last time, I didn't know you wanted to do that.

>> No.26070  

Chapter 1 still not updated here and on dynasty.

>> No.26073  

All good!

Cute chapter and was fun to do. Thanks to everyone involved!

>> No.26079  

Here's the cleaned chapter 3 in psd files.

>> No.26084  

Thank you! I'll get to it.

>> No.26110  

Here's chapter 3. No credits yet.

>> No.26114  

Looking good. Great job as always.

>> No.26119  

I appreciate it!

Chapter's updated. Added credits.

>> No.26135  


Released. Good work everyone!

>> No.26136  

Also, I've uploaded the download link and the chapter on Dynasty for chapter 1 with the fixes.

>> No.26138  

Fixed a typo on page 8.

>> No.26139  

Over at another group, there were some nice words about the quality of this release. Good job, everyone!

>> No.26146  

I've updated the download link with the new page 8 and the upload on Dynasty.

>> No.26308  

Still waiting for the anon who usually does it or whoever wants to CLRD chapter 4. I mean I probably could do it myself, but it won't be as good (considering how clean the previous chapters are). I'm not much of a redrawer tbh.

>> No.26310  

I still want to help, but don't have time right now. I will try to start cleaning ch4 next week. I also have ch5, but I will post it after ch4 is done.

>> No.26335  

Just started cleaning ch4. It will take a while. Just letting you know.

>> No.26345  

Here's the cleaned chapter 4 in psd files.

>> No.26349  


Thanks! I'll start working on it.

>> No.26496  


>> No.26530  

Very interested in seeing this one get done!

>> No.26722  
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Chapters 5-7 + Extra (Complete)

RAW: https://www.mediafire.com/file/hri2rgosq9es3ns

>> No.26726  


Nice. I'll get on the TL

>> No.26738  
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Orange Otter seems to be MIA since March of last year. Anyone want to pick up the RD/TS?

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