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883588 No.22084   [Reply]

Write here your comments on releases.
Fill in the Subject field with the release name and consider writing sage in the Link field.

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>> No.26420  

I'm willing to translate this whole story. Please contact me on dc

>> No.26422  

I've already translated all of Vol. 1 and am working on Vol. 2. There's a group working on it slowly but surely.

>> No.26581  

is the user Moonspace on mangadex associated with the group?

>> No.26590  

>>26585
thanks, that user tried to "claim" the group on MD

>> No.26933  

Nooooooo all links are dead T_T



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285812 No.26464   [Reply]

Three stories in one volume. The third one is full length and is for all you drama geeks out there. Sweet adult drama free yuri stories.

https://www.mediafire.com/file/pwizz5z07w1ytsc/Riso_to_Koi.zip/file

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>> No.26799  

Picnic chapter is ready for review.

https://drive.google.com/drive/u/0/folders/1J0N-OVXlrzB3pdPN7yoArFC26J-0ogSR

>> No.26815  

Part 1 is ready for review. Same link as above.

>> No.26921  

This is my first time QCing and I left a lot of comments šŸ˜…

notation is {page number}/{panel number}, and when referring to other review comments, {page number}/{panel number}/{review comment number}.

If thereā€™s certain categories of comment you donā€™t agree with, do say that, I wonā€™t mention them in future.

42/3: ā€œyou areā€ is a bit awkward in speech, I think ā€œyou'reā€ is more natural
43/2: Dots after 悓 only partially removed
43/3: ā€œItā€™s too badā€ isnā€™t an idiom; itā€™s either ā€œThatā€™s too badā€ or ā€œToo badā€
44/1: Text off-center in 2nd bubble
44/3: ā€œButā€ repeated
44/4: Mixed use off crossbar ā€œIā€? Not sure if intentional, but it looks a bit weird to me.
45/2: Text off-center, and Iā€™m not sure about ā€œIn general you will always match meā€, it just comes across weird. Maybe something like ā€œYou always want to match with meā€ instead?
45/4: 恭 partially removed
46/1: ā€œThat meansā€ is repeated from the previous page, but I think the second one might read better as ā€œIt meansā€
46/1: Repeated use of the word ā€œcustomerā€ doesnā€™t read well. Maybe replace the first with ā€œIt means she sees me as special, right?!ā€, or the second with ā€œIā€™m not just a stranger any moreā€ or ā€œIā€™m not just some random any moreā€
46/3: Uncapitalize ā€œWithā€, and needs a semicolon at the end
46/4: Uncapitalize ā€œBecameā€, and needs a comma at the end
46/5: Uncapitalize ā€œAndā€
46/5: Text off-center for ā€œYeah, it is!ā€
46/5: Possibly add a comma in ā€œSince you must be short on time[,] do you eat toast in the morning?ā€
47/1: ā€œYou areā€ again, which might read better as ā€œyouā€™reā€
47/1: ā€œIs there any bread that you are fond of?ā€ is a bit of a weird thing to ask; maybe ā€œAre there any types of bread youā€™re fond of?ā€ is better
47/2: Another thing where inserting ā€œtypes ofā€ or ā€œkinds ofā€ would help: ā€œI like various types of little rollā€. Or just ā€œI do like little rollsā€. Unless of course she means that when she eats bread, she buys several little rolls that are pairwise distinct flavours, but that seems unlikely?
47/2: ā€œOnes with things like Gobou salad or gratin on topā€ ā€“ Iā€™d remove the ā€œthings likeā€, since to me it reads too vague. Or maybe replace it with ā€œtoppings likeā€
48/3: ā€œSome breadā€ introduces an uncountable noun, so here she should say ā€œThis much?ā€ rather than ā€œThis many?ā€.
48/3: I donā€™t really like the repeated use of ā€œpleaseā€. Maybe use ā€œdo accept themā€ instead, or remove the ā€œOh pleaseā€?
48/3: ā€œAs long as itā€™s not a botherā€ to me is more natural as ā€œIf itā€™s not a botherā€.

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>> No.26922  

How excitingā€¦

083/1: Text off-center in 3rd bubble
086: Increase the width of the border on the white text, to match the raws and aid readability
086/2: Repeated ā€œButā€
086/2: A small comment, I donā€™t think the handwritten font used for ā€œPEOPLE MADE OF GLASSā€ quite captures the feel of the original. Maybe something serif would look better?
087/1: ā€œA friend of my friendā€ isnā€™t wrong, but it might be worth changing to the idiom ā€œa friend of a friendā€ since itā€™s so close
092/3: Put ā€œAll The Flowers Theater Troupeā€ in quotes? It has consistency with page 96 as well
094/3: ā€œself introā€ ā†’ ā€œself-introā€?
095/1: Text off-center in 1st bubble
095/1: Iā€™m not sure what ā€œEphemeralā€ is supposed to mean here?
096/5: ā€œSweatsā€ is a North American-specific phrase. Iā€™m not sure if we want to avoid that, just noting because I certainly didnā€™t know the word.
098/1: ā€œOkayā€ needs centering and punctuation, and potentially ā€œHyaaaā€ needs punctuation too
098/1: Maybe itā€™s better to replace the second ā€œOKā€ with ā€œLike that.ā€ or ā€œGood.ā€ (or the first with ā€œGot it.ā€ or ā€œRight.ā€), because itā€™s a bit weird to respond to ā€œokayā€ with ā€œokayā€.
099/2: Some syllables are missing. It should be ā€œA E I U E O A O // KA KE KI KU KE KO KA KO // SA SE SHI SU SE SO SA SO // TA TE CHI TSU TE TO TA TOā€. And the SFX is just the same thing, but cut off, so instead of the ellipses continue the lines until it overruns the panel.
099/3: ā€œAmembaā€ ā†’ ā€œAmemboā€
101/1: She says the same thing twice. Maybe ā€œYou look like youā€™re in your teens!ā€; or swap the bubble order, so the second bubble becomes a clarification.
101/2: Well thatā€™s the second word Iā€™ve learnt today, apparently ā€œSnerkā€ is Internet slang. šŸ˜„ (no action needed)
103/4: ā€œappearsā€ ā†’ ā€œappearā€, since ā€œA man and a womanā€ is plural
104/4: ā€œAhā€ needs punctuation
104/4: It might look more balanced if ā€œasā€ was moved to the next line in the second non-grey bubble? Not sure.
106/1: I think hypenation is appropriate in the 1st bubble.
106/1: Text off-center in 5th bubble.
108/2: ā€œI totally ended up thinking how amazing the actors were!ā€ is a weird sentence. I might be better to entirely replace with something like ā€œI was completely awed by how amazing all the actors were!ā€.
108/3: Punctuation after ā€œHahahaā€, perhaps an em dash or comma
109/3: Missing ā€œandā€ in the 1st bubble
113/2: Text off-center in 5th (last) bubble

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>> No.26932  

Thanks for the review! I've made the changes and am waiting on feedback from Nobody before uploading.



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255889 No.26778   [Reply]

Cute one shot by the same mangaka who did Handsome Girl and Sheltered Girl.

https://www.mediafire.com/file/gbf680jtdgo7nxd/This_Is_Not_Heaven%252C_But.zip/file

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>> No.26796  

I did intend to use Chinacat for dialogue, but if you think that itā€™s better to use a different font then Iā€™m happy to, Iā€™m just not familiar with how it ā€œshouldā€ be done (also, font recommendations would be appreciated :D).

re 27/3: I donā€™t like how a comma reads there, but I put ellipses and that should be better?

>> No.26798  

I typically use Wild Words for dialogue, Chinacat for narration, Zud Juice for thoughts, and augie for handwriting. That's what's recommended in the how-to guides I've read, since you can get free versions of each.

re 27/3 yes, that reads better

>> No.26843  

Looks like another version got upload to MD: https://mangadex.org/title/be3a9631-4775-4dc4-8dde-a761b71bfa68/koko-ha-tengoku-ja-nai-kedo

>> No.26845  

>>26843

Yeah, that's Kirin's version. It's no problem to finish this up and upload it. He knew I was translating it before he started on it.

>> No.26924  

Sorry it took a while, but I finally finished this up. I found another font I liked (Edu SA Beginner) and changed narration to use it. Iā€™ve sent the upload request to Dynasty now, and will upload to MD.



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249397 No.26718   [Reply]

A cute one-shot from Yuri Hime. 30 pages of light school girl angst after the big problem has been solved.

Raws online (you'll have to rip them yourself):
https://ichijin-plus.com/episodes/140156666105608

>> No.26719  
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Content warning: Ok, so you've landed the popular girl at school, now the real troubles start; A bullied girl with guts (and something to fight for) for once; Heroine seizes the initiative and solves the problem within 30 pages. Why can't all yuri series do that...?

>> No.26923  

yeah I totally whiteboxed page 14, sorry about thatā€¦

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1l9M_VHo-sLYclGiz3SfUgbn3my47ogA0



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1629072 No.26657   [Reply]

If you are a fan of *Crescent Moon and Doughnuts", you likely will enjoy this sweet story. 59 pages.

https://www.mediafire.com/file/mpkkzk35rndn82c/Tamago_no_Tsurezure.zip/file

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>> No.26811  

>>26810

Thanks for the PR. For page 29, how about this:

But itā€™s not like I only go for women.

>> No.26812  

hmmm, maybe its just worded weird in the original text. Or maybe she's addressing why she doesn't accept OR deny by stating two different statements here. If that's the case, then having women in the wording makes sense. So she's saying, she doesn't deny the allegations because she is living with a lesbian, but she doesn't accept them because the doesn't love only women. Okay, that makes more sense now that I've typed it out. I guess the wording was just throwing me off.

>> No.26813  

So maybe the best solution would be to add a "but" to the line "it's not like I only love women either." to indicate that these aren't a continuous statement.

>> No.26814  

>>26813

Works for me!

>> No.26919  

Thanks! Updated now, Iā€™ll upload at some point.

In page 5, ā€œIncomingā€ was actually capitalized, it just looks a bit weird. I moved it up one pixel and it fixed it.



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242177 No.26917   [Reply]

A sweet, innocent, and somewhat whack-a-doodle game based phantasy. Curiously, the yuri is both coy and in your face at the same time. The battle scenes SFX are basic but chonky, so you might have to pick the redraw route to win this game. Volume one of four, 168 pages.

https://www.mediafire.com/file/657ygvrfie95x41/Hinayuri_Adventures.zip/file

>> No.26918  
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Content Warning: The casual nudity has been weaponized; Cute critter overload with their cute, grating vocal tics; Primary Class - Sage, Secondary Class - Dance Pimp.



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253882 No.26909   [Reply]

Chapter 1 of 5 of a bang bang lick lick vampire series. Chapter 1 has already been scanlated, but since I'm going to TL the rest, I'm starting over with ch01.

https://www.mediafire.com/file/1ckyosmvbbno9qf/A_Bride_Who_Gets_Married_to_Vampire_Ch01.zip/file

>> No.26910  
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Content warning: Vampires vs. Werwolves, Childhood friends are on the food chain, and the erotic tension of sitting down to a meal is cranked to 11.



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244345 No.26902   [Reply]

Side Change by Onaji Numa no Mujina: Ryo Tsuzura (art) and Soh Futaba (story). Sweet little high school yuri one shot with a two page short story. Any guesses on how much longer the two page short story took to translate than the 39 page manga?

>> No.26903  

https://www.mediafire.com/file/s9u7uypdzwnmdjp/Side_change.zip/file

>> No.26904  
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Content Warning: Even harmless wack jobs can find a sweetie nowadays; Actually, don't count the wack job out, she's got more spunk than the kendo girl; And when someone's burrowing their face into the breast of your blazer, it's not a bad time to ask for a smooch.



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252317 No.26891   [Reply]

Excavating some old Nanatsu Fuji from back in 2016. School girl girl's school hijinks. Volume one of two. 169 pages.

https://www.mediafire.com/file/1hm5wo9k0xoo6dh/Spring_Yuri_V01.zip/file

>> No.26892  
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Content warning: No subtext allowed, only drool; The cool girl plays it cool, the wacko plays fast and loose so it plays a bit like sasameki koto; Age gap - The teacher teaches all the right things.

>> No.26893  

If Kirin doesn't want to do it anymore, I may pick this up after finishing Suito-to and My Ideal, My Love. I remember him saying he was working on it some time back. Also, not sure where you're getting some of these raws, but that watermark is hideous.

I'll probably buy the raws myself if I do.

>> No.26894  

Kirin said heā€™s not working on it, so itā€™s fair game.



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298091 No.26665   [Reply]

One volume sweet schoolgirl story where derp meets dere.

https://www.mediafire.com/file/dcmca4bahztrspw/Oshi_no_Bishojo_ni_kokuhaku_v01.zip/file

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>> No.26803  

I appreciate all your work!

>> No.26880  

Took way too long overall, but maybe this kept the author on people's minds longer than usual. I hope there's a volume 2 out there or in the works, but I also hope not because some of these sfx weren't hard but very time wastey :(

>> No.26881  

Wootie! Thanks for all the hard work!

>> No.26882  

after damien had a go

>> No.26890  

Completed and all on Dynasty after Sean and Nobody gave their passes.



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