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418948 No.23573   [Reply]

One-shot, 32 pages.

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>> No.24367  

Go for it!

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>> No.24385  

image 169. Maybe you'd want to make that 'Mmm...' a tad bigger?
image 170. You forgot to clean a hiragana and there's some spots you didn't clean in the bubble.
image 174. In the 'Haa' you might wanna redraw some lines in her head.
But honestly these are very nitpicky, I just couldn't find any mistake tbh. But hey, I wasn't prepared for such ending!

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>> No.24539  

Every single page has a bit of dust in both blacks and whites.

Page 154
"ding" on the very top left, make it smaller so it fits next to the line

Page 158
Top panel, second bubble (double bubble): add a break with hyphen like so:

Page 163
Second panel, first bubble: "care free" should be one word >> carefree

Page 169
Second panel >> "Mm..."

Page 173
White out the vertical print on the top left outside panel.
Third panel, first bubble is missing "I" >> "If I write a new song"

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>> No.22034  

Volume 6 raws by Phyis: https://mega.nz/#!7N4RzSpb!2OHm1PouzQJtIT9dB99HQUjvMc9wioSVH3puF1G7X6g

>> No.24446  

Can I continue this?
I know this is really old but I hope someone picks this up.

>> No.24448  

Yes, no one's working on it at the moment. Currently on ch103 >>16942

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>> No.24537  
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Each page needs to be resized to 2000px height and saved in grayscale mode (they're currently in Index). Also, if the previous chapters had horizontal ellipses instead of vertical, change them to match. Remember to add a credits page.

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3659642 No.5775   [Reply]

One-shot, 24 pages.

ED: http://www.mediafire.com/?3ww2pe92ux6q91b

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>> No.24138  


New version:

There's still a minor untranslated SFX in page 394.

As for "onegaishimasu", I decided to leave it as is, because I fairly remember using these and a few other Japanese expressions when I practiced judo as a kid.

>> No.24140  



shudder shudder

That and a credits page, and I think we're good to go.

Thank you for all your work.

>> No.24416  

Can this be released? Just needs a credits page, right?

>> No.24489  

Whoa, I totally forgot this existed. (I'm not dead yet, people).

I replaced the missing SFX and added the note about those untranslated words to the credits page. That's pretty much all I changed, but it might be a good idea to give it a look just to see if there's no missing pages or errors in the credits page.


>> No.24529  


Glad you hear you're yet among the living.

I think this looks good. I would make bring one thing to attention, but I hold that it's an optional change: it looks like you've moved the text on the "graduation" board (市五第2中…) down a bit to make room for the "graduation" text. I think that if we're not going to replace it, we should simply remove it entirely. That said, I don't think its presence is so much an eyesore that we can't release with it.

Thank you for your work.

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191590 No.24069   [Reply]

Raws posted by an anon on /u/

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>> No.24497  

Would you mind providing the PSDs? I want to do a Spanish translation. Thank you!

Also, I'll be doing the cleaning for the third story (girls complex a la mode 1-7).

>> No.24498  

Sure thing.

>> No.24503  

Frisse, could you correct the errors pointed out in these posts?

On page page 40, that line should change to "I just meant you could do that stuff with a friend—"

And on page 58 "and of my shampoo are mixing"

Sorry about this. I should've done a more thorough check before releasing them. We can update the pages with corrections on dynasty and mangadex.

>> No.24516  


I should've double-checked it too.

Here is the PSD if ya need it:

>> No.24520  
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Here's the updated page with the 'seethe' typo correction.

Updated on MangaDex.

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1427494 No.24479   [Reply]

Raw: https://mega.nz/folder/EMlHmLTZ#3M_kvapaS1drLD7Wf2DA_Q

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2839059 No.18606   [Reply]

Scan by Phyis.

From Tsubomi 20 and I Got Myself a Little Sister.

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>> No.24472  

I'll edit this.

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1072363 No.24401   [Reply]


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>> No.24428  

Yeah, I'd definitely like to keep working on this.

>> No.24447  

Chapter 14 for QC!

For page 68, I decided to place the SFX beside the original, rather than redrawing and replacing them, as the fireworks look like they would be impossibly difficult to redraw for me.


I think this was a good chapter. It was very cathartic to see them together again, and there were some funny moments as well. I'm sure everyone will be hyper focused on the cliffhanger, but I'm confident everything will turn out okay.

>> No.24449  

Nika-chan what happened to your leg!?
Nika-chan, what happened to your leg!?

->the last パン didn't get a BAM

>> No.24450  

Thanks for QCing! Updated.

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>> No.24435  

panels 2-4
->Change ellipses from vertical to horizontal ...

panel 1
->Ellipsis to horizontal

No time to be looking behind us.
No time to worry about others.

Don't look now, but I think we're getting outfought here.
They might actually be putting up more of a fight than us.
[meaning Momoka and Isuzu]


->you can erase the line in front of this sfx

->remove line


->emphasis instead of quotes

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>> No.24437  

Got it.

Is there anything that needs to be put in the notes?

>> No.24438  

The notes in the "n" section at the end of the TL would go on a page at the end of the release (since there are a ton of contemporary references in HXB no one outside of Japan would ever get). You can skip it for this chapter since they're pretty trivial

>> No.24443  

Are you guys planning to continue this upto HxB 2?

>> No.24444  

Yeah, I'll translate HXB 2

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391984 No.24386   [Reply]

One-shot, 24 pages.

>> No.24414  

I feel like I already read this... Anyways, I can edit (clean, typeset, qc) if someone translates it.

>> No.24415  

I saw the spanish translation on MD but it seems familiar to me too. I couldn't find an english version of it on the fly though.

>> No.24436  

Then there might only exist a JP-ESP direct translation and no ENG one.

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173831 No.17189   [Reply]

Scanned by Sailor Avalon.

TL: http://lililicious.capriciouswhim.com/%5Bukoz%5Dhakuchou(hayatexblade).zip
Untouched: http://lililicious.capriciouswhim.com/%5Bukoz%5Dhakuchou(uncleaned).zip

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>> No.17814  


Ready for QC

>> No.17851  


You'll be the next one I'll qc but it'll be after a few days (not in the next 24 hrs) or once I feel much better. Sorry for the delay. m(_ _)m

For now, 00 and 01 is a spread; could you try stitching them up?

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Translation for afterword and KOZ's part.

Akira's line at the top of page 6 is also a flashback.

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>> No.24421  

Assuming this isn't releasable without applying QC? Moved to "Needs Editor".

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