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249265 No.26824   [Reply]

Chapter two is more of the same, which will either delight or infuriate you.


>> No.26825  
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Content Warning: The pocky game is a double edged sword; and speaking of edgy, one girl knows how to play the game like an imp; and every one needs a plushy like that.

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589760 No.25646   [Reply]

Here's another oneshot by Arai Sumiko, this time from Yuri Hime's "Anthology of crying girls". I probably won't be translating it for a long time, if ever, so anyone else who's interested can have a go.


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>> No.26736  


boke, can you clarify page 39? Is your translation missing the text on panel 3? I'm not sure where each sentence goes

>> No.26737  


I did miss one thing, but mainly I didn't break up the panels the way I should have. Here's an update TL for p39



Nothing but fuck-ups today as well…


I’ve amended only half of the documents
I’ll have to go in early tomorrow…

It's like this everyday.


Even if you say “don’t apologize”…

I’m sorry to make you wait, Katsumata-san.


I’m such a loser…

sfx: slump

>> No.26744  


Thanks for the TL updates!


>> No.26816  

Saw some corrections on the dynasty discord and fixed them.

Also noticed a piece of stray sfx on page 12, which I cleaned up.

>> No.26817  

Nice release. Nice work everyone!

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285812 No.26464   [Reply]

Three stories in one volume. The third one is full length and is for all you drama geeks out there. Sweet adult drama free yuri stories.


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>> No.26535  

Merin, do you still plan on doing the CLRD and SFX for the second story?

>> No.26742  

Soo...I was let go from my job. On the plus side, I should have some free time to tackle some of my backlog here while job hunting.

>> No.26743  


Oof, that sucks. Good luck with the job hunt, and I hope you can squeeze in some fun with more free time. And of course, happy if you can spare some time for the projects here.

>> No.26799  

Picnic chapter is ready for review.


>> No.26815  

Part 1 is ready for review. Same link as above.

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1629072 No.26657   [Reply]

If you are a fan of *Crescent Moon and Doughnuts", you likely will enjoy this sweet story. 59 pages.


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>> No.26810  

Okay, found the missing pages. Stupid Google.

Pg5 pn2: Capitalize "Incoming"
Pg22 pn4: "...living with Jun was" needs punctuation. Ellipses would probably work.
Pg29 pn2: This reads weird. Should this say "And, it's not like I only love MEN either"? She's talking about why she's not refuting being a lesbian. So in her mind, she justifying why keeping the label is okay, since she's living with a lesbian, AND she doesn't only love men.

>> No.26811  


Thanks for the PR. For page 29, how about this:

But it’s not like I only go for women.

>> No.26812  

hmmm, maybe its just worded weird in the original text. Or maybe she's addressing why she doesn't accept OR deny by stating two different statements here. If that's the case, then having women in the wording makes sense. So she's saying, she doesn't deny the allegations because she is living with a lesbian, but she doesn't accept them because the doesn't love only women. Okay, that makes more sense now that I've typed it out. I guess the wording was just throwing me off.

>> No.26813  

So maybe the best solution would be to add a "but" to the line "it's not like I only love women either." to indicate that these aren't a continuous statement.

>> No.26814  


Works for me!

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240646 No.26731   [Reply]

Take a set of twins, season them with shitty parents, and see what kind of twisty psychological tensions you get. If you like internal struggles, this may be for you. 97 pages.


>> No.26732  
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Content warning: Incest; fountain pens as some sort of leaky metaphor; At least one friend isn't dumb as a brick.

>> No.26786  

Surprisingly didn’t take that long, since there’s no SFX. I also discovered that there is an official English translation, but TL and TS are both very bad (see for yourself: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/112511074) so I’m glad I did this anyway.

I actually know someone IRL named Rie with shitty parents and a twin sister who was their closest friend for all of childhood. I don’t think they’re quite as close as these two though…


>> No.26804  

thru page 50 (51-end are missing)

pg10 pn4: Capitalize "Mum"? Its capitalized everywhere else in the story.
pg12 pn3: "WAS seeing them fighting all the time"
pg13 pn2: I think the tl text works better here, rather than just "still..." Carries more weight.
pg20 pn1: Missing "these" before feelings
pg22 pn1: Missing comma after "hug is that"
pg22 pn3: Either "I haven't" instead of "I've never" or drop "yet"
pg32 pn1: Missing "to" - "mean TO you"
pg38 pn3: Don't need "the college". Just college. I don't think they're meaning there's only one college in the town.
pg46 pn3: uncapitalize "were"

>> No.26809  

So google decided to only select the first 50 pages for this and the other work when I used the "select all" keyboard shortcut, that's why I only had part of the review file.

Anyways, only thing of note was pages 59 & 60. Capitalization of Mum and Dad. You typically capitalize them for the first portion, so consistency would indicate they should be capitalized by the twins here too.

Nobody will probably catch stuff I missed. Interesting story.

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256677 No.26807   [Reply]

One volume (200ish pages) of short stories, some high school, some college age. The first story has already been scanlated and is on Dynasty. The first couple pages of Chapter 6 is up on Mangadex, but it wasn’t complete, so I translated the whole chapter.


>> No.26808  
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Content warning: The neighbor girl's got some grr in her tank; If you don't let your co-dependent girlfriend have some quality co-dependent time, she might just walk out on your ass; and when two repressed wanna be lesbians actually get out of their "tee-hee" phase, we might as well call the subtext dead.

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298091 No.26665   [Reply]

One volume sweet schoolgirl story where derp meets dere.


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>> No.26795  

Disappointingly slow, all things considered.
Helldivers 2 real good though.

>> No.26800  

After a qc pass by Damien

>> No.26801  

I went to check to the post-damian qc files and they (or at least the first few pages) are missing sfx.

>> No.26802  

Thanks! Got reamed on that by Sean as well. Going to release this very shortly and then get reamed by Nobody as well for continuing to work on this while sleepy.

>> No.26803  

I appreciate all your work!

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295849 No.26675   [Reply]

One volume for all you yuri magical girl drama geeks out there.


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>> No.26780  

Re: Ch4
Pg 67 - that's fine then. That was my interpretation, but your explanation works too.
Pg 73 - In this case, it's the experienced star giving direction to a newer star. Everyone is looking at her as the leader, so Maika is explaining that even if she's anxious, she should be acting as if she's not to boost the confidence of the other cast and crew, as the "leader" of the troupe.
Pg87 - "These" is in reference to Kana's continued words of praise and support same as the "This warmth" that Kana is providing. So "These words" and "This warmth" are tied together.

Ch5 Review:
Pg91 pn1: Either Change to a period or uncapitalize "do"
Pg109 pn2: uncapitalize "The"
Pg110 pn4: Splitting "praised" feels weird. Is it because of the CLRD?
Pg115 pn2: Missing comma between "thing" and "right"
Pg115 pn3: Splitting "Litt-le" feels weird here too

>> No.26782  

I’ve updated p73 and p87, and ch5.
(re p110, it wasn’t about CLRD, I just didn’t like the balance of the other options. But I changed to “She praised // me!” and it’s fine).

>> No.26792  

P125 pn3: "I want to see yo..." is missing from the first text box.

Rest looks good.

>> No.26793  

Chapter 7
Pg150 pn2: Missing "was". "What am I going to do if it "was" an accident?"
Pg151 pn4: Lowercase "L"
Pg161 pn1: Senpai not san

Interesting story. Didn't end quite how I thought it would.

>> No.26797  

Thanks again for the reviews in this series!

Re 151/4, that is in fact a lowercase L, it just looks uppercase in the font :)

I’ll be uploading to Dynasty and Mangadex every few days… can’t let everyone get spoiled after all ;)

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253955 No.26767   [Reply]

A pretty by-the-numbers foodie manga with a side dish of cute art, subtext and bait. Wait, so bait's being served up in a foodie manga? What's next?

Fair warning, someone's started to scanlate this, but I was already a third of the way done with my TL when their first chapter came out.


>> No.26768  
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Content warning: The author admits yuri baiting was the way he got this one published; the food is the orgasm; The couple's still cute enough where I ship them.

>> No.26791  

Just so anyone doesn’t attempt this (glad I didn’t, ha), it looks like it was picked up by Hot Salt Frying Scans: https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/sugar_meets_girl_ch01

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224849 No.26729   [Reply]

Collected from Hikagen's online something something. The word "cute" is way overused in this handful of vignettes, but it's well earned. Precious, even. 87 pages.


>> No.26730  
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Content warning: Low drama, high libido Ols; these two are dangerous close to that old joke - what does a lesbian bring on a second date? A U-Haul; home is where your honey is.

>> No.26790  

I’ll be batching them, probably in four parts overall

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