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820946 No.22931   [Reply]

One-shot, 28 pages.
https://tinyurl.com/yadhqgpg

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>> No.26299  

>>26250 Sorry took way too long. Here it is https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1S0_BCGmHouU_0C_irN5w6K5QLekR80sp

>> No.26300  

Cute oneshot. I wish there's a continuation.

>> No.26307  

Cuuuute oneshot.

>> No.26385  

Who uploaded this on dynasty?

>> No.26386  

dunno.



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2826058 No.26343   [Reply]

This is a really sweet story, much better written than most of it's genre. Nice balance of funny, sweet and a dash of angst. Four volumes overall, here is volume one. Since it's 4 koma, it might be a challenge to edit (certainly takes way longer to TL).

This series has two chapters over on Mangadex, but they are over 2 years old and I'm not crazy about the TL anyway.

https://www.mediafire.com/file/3v07zmxd7i0cftl/%255B%25E3%2582%25BF%25E3%2583%2584%25E3%2583%258E%25E3%2582%25B3%25E3%2583%2583%25E3%2582%25BD%255D_%25E7%25A4%25BE%25E7%2595%259C%25E3%2581%2595%25E3%2582%2593%25E3%2581%25A8%25E5%25AE%25B6%25E5%2587%25BA%25E5%25B0%2591%25E5%25A5%25B3_%25E7%25AC%25AC01%25E5%25B7%25BB.zip/file

>> No.26344  
File: Corporate Slave Lady and Runaway Girl Vol 01.txt -(61245 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

Content warning: Age gap, student/teacher, Vrrrm for the win.

>> No.26383  
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615209

More of the same. Fortunately.

https://www.mediafire.com/file/w1er9vdzu8xpeg4/%255B%25E3%2582%25BF%25E3%2583%2584%25E3%2583%258E%25E3%2582%25B3%25E3%2583%2583%25E3%2582%25BD%255D_%25E7%25A4%25BE%25E7%2595%259C%25E3%2581%2595%25E3%2582%2593%25E3%2581%25A8%25E5%25AE%25B6%25E5%2587%25BA%25E5%25B0%2591%25E5%25A5%25B3_%25E7%25AC%25AC02%25E5%25B7%25BB.zip/file

>> No.26384  
File: Corporate Slave Lady and Runaway Girl Vol 02.txt -(63076 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

Content warning: Miyu's got the best fetishes, requisite unrequited love, mmm - smell that angst wafting up from the ofuro.



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599196 No.25893   [Reply]

Here's volume 11. I've already started on the translation, will post the first chapter soon.

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>> No.26362  

>>26353

Thanks for the feedback! I’ll work on it soon. Will update here again by Wednesday, April 12.

>> No.26366  

>>26353

Done editing Chapter 124 with your feedback! I really appreciate it, especially the fonts.

I applied most of your suggestions except for "panel 4 bubble 4 should this be "she wouldn't have any problem at all" or "it'd be a breeze for her"?" on Page 5 cos I think the original is fine since Nanoha was thinking in Chidori's shoes.

Also edited Chapter 125 with the editing changes that can be applied there. I'm still open to make changes if needed.

The new pages are uploaded/updated in the Mega links previously posted in >>26266

>> No.26377  

new is 32 with faux italics
old is about 30

>>26266

For both chapters:
++ the main dialogue font, wild words, is a touch to big. recommend decreasing by 2 pts across all bubbles. With the exception of especially empty bubbles like in ch 124, page 39, panel 2 and 3. right now its too big overall so you're running into situations where the text blobs will almost touch like in ch 125, page 45, panel 5, bubble 2/3. also, you should try not to get too close to the edge of the bubble. leaving some margin makes it easier to read, kinda like why when you write a report you don't go all the way up to the edge of the page.
++ don't use faux italics. this: https://www.lifewire.com/faking-bold-and-italics-photoshop-1700272 , use real proper italics and bold like shown here: https://www.bwillcreative.com/how-to-make-bold-and-italic-text-in-photoshop/ . i'm not familiar enough with wild words to spot it right away, so please double check all of the bubbles for faux bold and faux italics.
++ [suggest you learn how to denoise raws https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sMaxKfWc7ow-Y4LCt191gQDVQDUpd7M3MWAmnyRpMzg/edit if you don't get it, lmk and i'll do it for you]

ch 124
-- page 40
++ panel 1, bubble 2 remove crossbar I from "nice". see this link for the reason why: https://blambot.com/pages/comic-book-grammar-tradition

ch 125

-- page 45
++ already mentioned but, panel 5 decrease the font size to better sperate the two text blobs in bubble 2/3.
++ [panel 5, bubble 4, suggest to change to CC Maladroit or creative block]

-- page 46
++ panel 2, bubble 1 remove crossbar I in "it's"
++ panel 2, bubble 2 remove crossbar I in "it's" (the repeat comment is not a mistake, the same comment for both bubbles)
++ [panel 3, bubble 2, suggest to change to CC Maladroit or creative block]

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>> No.26380  

Seems like some other group has already picked up this manga so it would be best to stop or communicate with them who should be doing it as it was irregular lately. They plan on releasing a chapter each week as we're down alot.

Sho habby scans discord - https://discord.gg/GdV76sQs7d

>> No.26381  

>>26380

Might be best to stop working on it. They already released Chapter 126 too.

>>26377

Thanks for the additional feedback! Since another group has already picked up the series and released both chapters I was working on, I see no point in further editing the work I've done.



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909789 No.26312   [Reply]

One part sexy, one part comedy, one part slice of life. All in one volume.

RAW: https://www.mediafire.com/file/akumzexbx971zzn/Sachi_to_You_Ka_v01.zip/file

>> No.26313  
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Content warning: girl running hot and cold, when you make a point make it with a knife, flowers and dildos are the next instagrammable moment.

>> No.26370  
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Content warning: densest straight you can find, Sachi and Yuuka so canon that their juices are everywhere, happy floppy ending.



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3131196 No.26359   [Reply]

Sweet two volume series that does what it says on the tin. Nice slice of life story that balances school stuff and adult lesbians.

https://www.mediafire.com/folder/cnqfz01etgmos/母の元カノと暮らした_01

https://www.mediafire.com/folder/ghqpo14i4udxg/母の元カノと暮らした_02

>> No.26360  
File: Living With My Mother's Ex-Girlfriends Vol 01.txt -(42625 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

Content warning: bitter but good hearted lesbians, legacy child-rearing, a guarantee of at least one good new fashioned lesbian relationship.

>> No.26361  

Zip it to one archive, coz mediafire wants you to pay for bulk download, lol.

>> No.26364  

https://www.mediafire.com/file/2cn6dx7c5pq2bnt/Haha_No_Motokano_to_Kurash_ta_v01-02.zip/file

>> No.26369  
File: Living With My Mother's Ex-Girlfriends Vol 02.txt -(50310 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

This concludes the series. Content warning: father head fake, power hand holding, the adults get less action than the kids.



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1557025 No.26367   [Reply]

The raws for this anthology is available online to read for free. A great collection of stories, well written and with a variety of subject matter.

>> No.26368  
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Some of these stories have been scanlated already, but I have noted which ones. Great variety of stories from school girls to lesbian prostitutes to lesbian assassins.



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859018 No.26356   [Reply]

One shot from the mangaka of Miss Sunflower. The link goes to the ComicWalker site where you can read the story for free.

>> No.26357  
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Translation was requested by Sika over at Dynasty. Open for editing if anyone is interested. Content warning: useless lesbians x2, nurses are co-dependent, mermaidism as a symbol of repression.



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279224 No.23502   [Reply]

One-shot, 42 pages.
https://tinyurl.com/y54bh5pm

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>> No.26321  

Unless there are more changes, this one is ready to be released.

>> No.26326  

>>26321

Released.

>> No.26330  
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242163

pg 13, "every since" -> "ever since"

>> No.26351  

>>26330
was this fixed?

>> No.26352  
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922900

I forgot to reply; I've been busy.
If anybody wants to update the page, here it is the corrected version.



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309620 No.19556   [Reply]

RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/download/c9sup6ya36plwpb

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>> No.26251  

>>26248
Added the credits page and zipped it.
https://mega.nz/file/fABgBBZa#WVFZgLr8UNPuXIncLErHs4EtP3oGvcq2yExW-c00irQ

After it's released here, who's gonna upload it to Dynasty? For Mangadex, please let me do it myself.

>> No.26255  

>>26251

I'll take care of Dynasty, I've got uploader permissions there. Do you want me to include "Bokita" as a second group alongside Yuri Project on Dynasty?

>> No.26256  

>>26255
Even though it's not actually a real group, sure, that would be nice. I just wanted an excuse to put the Bokita pairing somewhere.

>> No.26257  

>>26256

Sure thing.

And it's released on the site, go ahead and put it up on Mangadex whenever.

>> No.26348  

Ch2 looks good to me.



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929692 No.25409   [Reply]

Two separate shorts about some characters. 5 pages total.

https://mega.nz/folder/pWw2iZ6A#aenonwKKHIfvmgVpoLoYGw

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>> No.26176  

>>26174

If I haven’t comment on a change, I’m fine with it.

2f3
I'm not sure where the "Love!" from the script was supposed to end up here

—> Near Beni-chan’s head

3f3
The ghost line here is kinda stilted either way, my own suggestion would be
"I'm not pretending to be a ghost!"
Mainly because I don't think kids play ghost (unless it's the band of course, but this would be a category of playing pretend), or do ghost poses so it ends up being odd.

—-> I think the ghost image is simply and artistic affectation. There’s no mention of it in the story.

The daily life to has no life change is kinda big, thematically, so might need a review on that one.

—> “Has no life” is lively, but not accurate to the original text. The flavor is more of Beni-chan has a hard time keeping up with the day to day stuff.

>> No.26177  

>>26175

>>26174 Some things I want to add before I apply the quality changes.

1f2: After re-reading this panel, I think Ekio (light hair one) suggests Beni (dark hair one) move in with her. Beni asks if it's okay for her to not pay any rent or utilities, and so Eiko quickly changes the subject. As such, I think something more along the lines of "Is it fine if I don't pay any rent or utilities?" would better convey the original Japanese dialog.

--> This is accurate. I'm fine with the change.

2f3: I'm not sure where love is supposed to go. Boke would have to clarify.

--> see above

Beni: Regarding "loves Eiko," the original text conveys the message that Beni loves Eiko despite not understanding her hobby of yuri. "But Beni loves her anyway," conveys that liking yuri is a negative trait that Beni is able to look past, when in actuality, it's more so about loving someone despite not being able to understand them. As such, something like "Beni loves Eiko despite that fact that she had never heard of the word 'yuri' before she met her," would probably be a better translation.

Also, I would say that "has no life" is a better translation of 生活力 than "not great at daily life" and "basically" is a better translation of 基本的 than "to tell the truth," but I'm open to talking about it with Boke if he disagrees.

--> Changing 基本的 to "basically" works just fine.

--> After having consulted with a native speaker, the consensus was "has no life" is a big harsh. My TL is certainly clunky here, so maybe something in the neighborhood of "sucks at daily life"?

>> No.26187  

Applied all the suggested edits to the pages.

>> No.26249  

>>26187

This looks fine, just needs a credits page.

>> No.26346  

What's going on? Release it.



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