[Ugawa Hiroki] Walk Wit Me First PartTranslation Raw: http://www.mediafire.com/?ubbt4976cfyuf9nEditing Raw: http://www.mediafire.com/?v94jnf36607rbj5Two-part story. Scanned by Kuroshiyama.
[Ugawa Hiroki] Walk Wit Me First Part
Translation Raw: http://www.mediafire.com/?ubbt4976cfyuf9nEditing Raw: http://www.mediafire.com/?v94jnf36607rbj5
Two-part story. Scanned by Kuroshiyama.
>>19350Hebrews 11: 13-16 King James Version.https://www.biblegateway.com/passage/?search=Hebrews+11&version=KJVIs the correction needed when it's based on that?
>>19351 I guess not? I just hope "your" doesnt end up replacing "you're" in the future.
>>19352Okay.
Page 018 and 019 was a two-page spread. I missed it somehow. Here's the fix.
>>19703Mega link updated.
Vol 1 RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/download/araupvdba6k7cwwVol 2 RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/download/ac7ekhp3g51nnquVol 3 RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/download/wtc88syh5qcd3b5Vol 4 RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/download/w1z045ya2a1979yVol 5 RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/download/tb5s547e3r4ujxd
I Need No Wives Any More!! Vol. 1RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/download/k69de5467zei6bgThe first and last volume of the Yuri Danshi sequel. Series is on hiatus.
I Need No Wives Any More!! Vol. 1RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/download/k69de5467zei6bg
The first and last volume of the Yuri Danshi sequel. Series is on hiatus.
RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/download/35vthpp2trog9xj
Reminder that >>17403 makes scripts available for any interested editors.
Collected in Dark, Marsh, Nightwood. 32 pages.Public raw (do not use): http://www.mediafire.com/download/623tw7os1wf1hsu/sakamoto-yh33.rarHQ editing raw will be available on request.
Collected in Dark, Marsh, Nightwood. 32 pages.
Public raw (do not use): http://www.mediafire.com/download/623tw7os1wf1hsu/sakamoto-yh33.rarHQ editing raw will be available on request.
>>19632>It means she was making up things to criticize her for.Can I change it to this?
>>19632
>It means she was making up things to criticize her for.
Can I change it to this?
>>19634No, 'rag on' fits a lot better.
>>19636Ok
>>19636
Ok
http://www.mediafire.com/download/zqb34hmcapxtomj/Keiko_and_Fuuko_InQC_V2.zip
>>19643Released.
36 pageshttp://www.mediafire.com/download/jdupn93ks07kzho/COCYTUS04.zip
>>19630Released.
pg 132 "lettting go" (letting go)
>>19635Thanks, updated the page to MediaFire instead of here because of some reason.
>>19635
Thanks, updated the page to MediaFire instead of here because of some reason.
>>19646where is the mediafire folder located?
>>19646The homepage Mega link is updated.>>19647Here's the new archive:https://mega.nz/#!qJp3iAhb!u-dwPTdGLFTKerU4z4HuDvIjgB_H4SOO8tcBkPJP5GQ
RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/download/wdsuxyxxd33wgxdSome of those one-shots are twisted. One was already done by Yuri Project, it's "Your Fault."
RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/download/wdsuxyxxd33wgxd
Some of those one-shots are twisted. One was already done by Yuri Project, it's "Your Fault."
>>19608You always want that which belongs to others, right?So before I know it I'm flirting with another girl.And once I have them, they're no longer enough....Disappointed?But it can't be helped.Because that's just who I am.And if it makes you that mad...you probablyalready fell in love with me.Your Fault.>>19609I wanted to do an NTR story from both points of view. I wrote a bit frantic and some parts could have been better, but I learned from it.That's how it came about.I've started to notice a pattern in my own works of "we'll never be able to go back to the way we were before." I wonder why that is. It's not exactly my favorite framework for a story, so I'll be watchful of it going forward.
>>19612Thanks. I can edit this pages so we can add them.
Done.
>>19614
>>19615Thanks, I updated the release post on the homepage with it and sent an update request to Dynasty.
RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/download/3e9j9yzb50y8y13This is a really interesting manga based on the author's own life.
RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/download/3e9j9yzb50y8y13
This is a really interesting manga based on the author's own life.
>>19395What they said. Also the raws for the pixiv chapters weren't really that polished in my opinnion. Editing was fine, though. Well all right, as soon as Multiball's done with some translations I'd love to do some editing.
>>19395What they said. Also the raws for the pixiv chapters weren't really that polished in my opinnion. Editing was fine, though.
Well all right, as soon as Multiball's done with some translations I'd love to do some editing.
>>19395What they said. Also the raws for the pixiv chapters weren't really that polished in my opinnion. Editing was fine. Well all right, as soon as Multiball's done with some translations I'd love to do some editing.
>>19395What they said. Also the raws for the pixiv chapters weren't really that polished in my opinnion. Editing was fine.
It does look like the existing translations wouldn't fit nicely into the current book's format. As far as I can tell, starting from scratch is the most graceful option.Gulf, if you want to do this one, then you got it. Otherwise, I'll start a translation from a blank slate.
It does look like the existing translations wouldn't fit nicely into the current book's format. As far as I can tell, starting from scratch is the most graceful option.
Gulf, if you want to do this one, then you got it. Otherwise, I'll start a translation from a blank slate.
Tetsu-scans picked it up.http://tetsu-scans.blogspot.co.uk/2016/08/the-private-report-on-my-lesbian.html
Guh. Well, you snooze, you lose, I guess.
34 pageshttp://www.mediafire.com/download/tt8pas7ljm2l4v8/COCYTUS03.zip
>>19580Got it, made the revisions and reverted it back. Though just two notes that I wanted to say. Page 69, I got rid of that black bar after moving the title since it was a bit distracting. Also on some of the text it was because of the font that made it look uneven, so instead I just reshaped the whole thing.
>>19580
Got it, made the revisions and reverted it back. Though just two notes that I wanted to say. Page 69, I got rid of that black bar after moving the title since it was a bit distracting. Also on some of the text it was because of the font that made it look uneven, so instead I just reshaped the whole thing.
>>19583I think it looks good now. Good job.
>>19583
I think it looks good now. Good job.
>>19583Released.
maybe I am wrong but pg 82>as for feeling that dedicate sensation,shouldnt it be, "as for feelings that dedicate sensation,"?
maybe I am wrong but pg 82
>as for feeling that dedicate sensation,
shouldnt it be, "as for feelings that dedicate sensation,"?
>>19587I don't think so. It doesn't make sense for that word to be plural.
>>19587
I don't think so. It doesn't make sense for that word to be plural.
RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/download/v5ab6clkxzfuobm
Sequel to >>17329.Scanned by WeatheredPeach. 28 pages.http://drive.google.com/file/d/0B6eSPntFU8MNakRzTnVmQ2pRWFE
Sequel to >>17329.
Scanned by WeatheredPeach. 28 pages.http://drive.google.com/file/d/0B6eSPntFU8MNakRzTnVmQ2pRWFE
>>19547> If you want, I could add a subject and therefore a comma.No worries, I'd just leave it that way if that's the case.> I would use "I feel really sluggish this morning." Is that okay?Yep, that sounds better. At first I was skeptical about that sentence but that fits more. Though last thing, wanted to ask about Pg 8, on the last two panels of the narration text."Why is that my sister has seemed kinder lately..." seems a bit weird to me but could be used. Maybe changing that to, "Why is that my sister has been acting kinder lately..." if that sounds better.
>>19547
> If you want, I could add a subject and therefore a comma.
No worries, I'd just leave it that way if that's the case.
> I would use "I feel really sluggish this morning." Is that okay?
Yep, that sounds better. At first I was skeptical about that sentence but that fits more.
Though last thing, wanted to ask about Pg 8, on the last two panels of the narration text."Why is that my sister has seemed kinder lately..." seems a bit weird to me but could be used. Maybe changing that to, "Why is that my sister has been acting kinder lately..." if that sounds better.
>>19562> Maybe changing that to, "Why is that my sister has been acting kinder lately..." if that sounds better.Yep, it does.http://www.mediafire.com/download/2g48m65gbr1suo7/No_Carriage_InQC_V2.zip
>>19562
> Maybe changing that to, "Why is that my sister has been acting kinder lately..." if that sounds better.
Yep, it does.
http://www.mediafire.com/download/2g48m65gbr1suo7/No_Carriage_InQC_V2.zip
>>19567Everything looks very nice, though before wrapping it up, there are just two very small suggestions on page 9. Panel 3 bubble 1, "I've always hated how she had me beat in..." could be changed to "I've always hated how she defeated me in..."panel 4 "pretty adorable..." changed to "it was pretty adorable..."That's about it for me to say, good work on this one. How lewd the hand holding was.
>>19567
Everything looks very nice, though before wrapping it up, there are just two very small suggestions on page 9.
Panel 3 bubble 1, "I've always hated how she had me beat in..." could be changed to "I've always hated how she defeated me in..."
panel 4 "pretty adorable..." changed to "it was pretty adorable..."
That's about it for me to say, good work on this one. How lewd the hand holding was.
>>19568http://www.mediafire.com/download/7acbr73tt1orzvz/No_Carriage_InQC_V3.zipI also italized "was" for emphasis. It sounded pretty good to me. Thanks for your help.
>>19568
http://www.mediafire.com/download/7acbr73tt1orzvz/No_Carriage_InQC_V3.zip
I also italized "was" for emphasis. It sounded pretty good to me. Thanks for your help.
>>19569Released.
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